In terms of plot, the piece is slightly unclear because there is no dialogue or establishing shots that give the viewer an idea of the story. The camera shots of the trees are slightly shaky but give an idea of the location that the thriller is set.
I think that the title could be improved because the 'E' and the 'xpendable' are disaligned and also in mismatched fonts which makes the title look slightly unprofessional. The two fonts are also different colours which decreases the authenticity of the title and makes the opening overall look shoddy. 
The positioning of the credits are well done but i would comment that the font does not suit the genre of the film as it looks simple and like a basic font found on a computer. This has a negative impact on how professional the piece looks so if i was to suggest an improvement i would use a more suitable font for a thriller introduction.
The costume of the character is unusual because he is wearing a formal suit with bowtie but on his feet has large wellington boots which makes the viewer question his intention for being out in the snow. The shot is stationary whilst the character walks across the bridge and the narrow walls reinforce his solidarity.
A low shot shows his boots as he walks along the icy bridge. A canted angle is combined with a blurred effect that disorientates the viewer and i would like to use this sort of effect in my thriller because it adds the atmosphere of unstability. 
Towards the end of the introduction a lengthy shot is shown of the character reading a letter. Despite creating dramatic enigma it also gives no indication of what the plot is about. if i improved it i would add a voiceover which reads the letter to add some mystery and give hints at the plot.
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